Thursday, January 29, 2009

Capitalizing Practice

Before:

ok so im dead im floating around piggy ralph and their group try to start a fire boring.... umm lemme see what jack is doin the person that killed me!! >:(.. umm oh wait ralph goes to jack and blows the conch and he getting pelted with rocks. umm lets see the whole fortress that jack has is surronded bu gaurds. yup lets see oh jack has a pigs head and he tells ralph to leave and then he calls jack a thief and ralph asks to return piggys glasses. yup. they started to fight and sam n eric are tied up. then ralph asks again for the glasses then he loses his temper and then they fight again.

After:

Okay so I'm dead I'm floating around Piggy, Ralph, and their group try to start a fire boring.... umm lemme see what Jack is doing the person that killed me!! >:(.. umm oh wait Ralph goes to Jack and blows the conch and he getting pelted with rocks. Umm lets see the whole fortress that Jack has is surrounded by gaurd's. Yup lets see oh Jack has a pigs head and he tells Ralph to leave and then he calls Jack a thief and Ralph asks to return Piggy's glasses. yup. they started to fight and Sam n Eric are tied up. then Ralph asks again for the glasses then he loses his temper and then they fight again.

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